You have made a good start here and you have covered everything necessary although a little more detail is needed.
To improve: - add lots more detail on audience profiling both on the existing advert slide and on the one for your new proposed advert - check your spelling, punctuation and grammar throughout - add more specific detail on what would happen in your new advert - you have listed 2 channels and times for your advert to be aired - either say which would be better or put them on the same slide
Courtney,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and you have covered everything necessary although a little more detail is needed.
To improve:
- add lots more detail on audience profiling both on the existing advert slide and on the one for your new proposed advert
- check your spelling, punctuation and grammar throughout
- add more specific detail on what would happen in your new advert
- you have listed 2 channels and times for your advert to be aired - either say which would be better or put them on the same slide
Ellie